TONI

term 3 writing sample lost in the supermarket
== "Mum" I shouted "yes" she said "can i get this ?" "sure" Mum said in a normal voice.I started walking down the aisle and got what i wanted .I turned around and i see that my mum was gone .I look up I look down I didn't see her I ran up and down aisle's looking for her ,i still couldn't see her i remember but she or she had said something to me before I left ,but I wasn't listening to her. ==

== "Mum" I shouted I couldn't hear her at all.So I went to have a look in a aisle where she hadn't been yet.I waited and waited there was no sign of her yet. I cansmell hot chicken that has just came out of the oven.I put my head down and i began to cry,I can feel my tears running down my face like a waterfall. ==

== "Attention there is a little girl that is missing she is wearing pink shorts with a blue t-shirt.If this child belongs to you please come up thankyou" I saw my Mum running like a fast cheetah to get me .Mum said after you got your drinki told you to meet me by the frozens area didn't you hear me "No"i said in a funny voice.Next time you come with me and you want something turn your ears on so I can tell you where you should meet me "OK" i said in a annoying voice. ==

==Firstly i am waiting in the crowed line waiting for my turn .Finally its our turn,me and my friend are in the log we are going up a steep hill we leaned back.We are going through a dark tunnel,i am scared said Toni me to said Tayla in a quite voice we go down a little hill we screamed "ahhhhh" there was a nice waterfull "it splashed in my face" Tayla said in a angry voice.==

==Secondly we are going pass the gold room with lots and lots of gold.Toni proudly says "i wish i had that much gold.'ohh no " as me and my friend are getting to the end.We are at the the end.We go down i see a flash in my eyes.It was the hidden camera,we got wet and damp.We got out of the log,and we see people by this little we saw our picture.==

Thirdly we thought our picture was ugly because we didn't know that there was a hidden camera.As soon as we saw ,the flash,we would of smiled.
==Inconclusion we went off and started talking about the ride that next time when we go on the log flume we will smile at the end.We were thinking of going on another ride,but we didn't want to.That was the best day ever me and my friend said happily.==