CONNIE

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Click Bong there goes the belt of the roller coaster ride im shaking like im having a little electric shock,as we go around and up the track. My heart is beating like a horse trotting along the ground.This is my first try out and im crazily scared as we reach the top. Click Click the ride goes as the carts go up.Suddenly the clicking stops and we go fast down and around the track ,I look th the front and back as everyones screaming at hte top of their lungs.I turn around to see why everyones screaming,Zoom we go down and flip around,my heart has dropped to my stomach.Thats not the end so I cling on tight as we go sideways.I cant feel anything as I go but here comes the rolling part,I think im going to be sick.I scream at the top of my lungs as we finish the last loops.Yay it is finally over as we slow down to where we started from.Clash the ride makes a hissing sound a people unlock our belts.The minute I get out I fall over like an old grandad would.I am unstable but I try to keep my ballance as we walk down the stairs

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Moment of panic!!!! The sun is as bright as one thousand light bulbs, the sea is as blue as the sky and the sand is like million peices of glass smached into tiny crumbs. This is the perfect spot for a shark, especially when it is hungry and is searching for his lunch.

My friends and family have come for a picnic in the sun, a fun day instead of staying at home. It is extremely hot and sweats running down my cheek, so I put on sunblock and race for the crystal clear water. I swim out to deep water, followed by my brother and his friend, we splash around, dive down to the bottom and throw the vollyball around.

I heard a yell saying get out of the water, its a shark, as the man swam as fast as he could. We took no notice of the fin in the water as it came closer and closer to me. Woosh I felt something go past my leg,It scrapes me and hurts, like sand paper scraping across wood.

The shark goes past my brother as I panic and yell for help but there is no use, we are far out and knowone can hear me. I scream for help as the shark comes back for me I close my eyes and look away.Then splash I turn around and theres no sign of of the shark all there is is my brother holding me.We get back on land and race up to my family and tell them what had happened.Who kows what could have happened to me.I could of been that sharks lucky lunch.